Sunday, July 29, 2012

My Speech

on Wednesday 6th  of June room12 presented their discovery speeches I was really nervous about my speech, my speech was about Thomas Edison. I think I did well using my clarity of voice, memorizinig my speech and having a prop. Improvements I think I have to make more informations about how he did his inventions and making more eye contact and what I learnt about Thomas Edison is that never give up easily.                                                      

1 comment:

  1. Hi Charlene,

    I like your informations about Thomas Edison. You were loud and clear, but you need to use more eye contact.

    From Vince

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